Tribal Moonlight Transition (First Place)

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Tribal Moonlight Transition (First Place)

Postby Shinbison-Kof » Tue Nov 04, 2014 5:57 pm

This is my contest 9 level, I got the first place, I'm very happy!
But IMO, in the contest have incredibles levels, and they deserve win the contest.
Thanks all judges!
I wanted to surprise, but... XD

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1. Shinbison-Kof - Tribal Moonlight Transition - 9.57/10
  • Bomber57 (9.75/10)
    • Wow. This level was just amazing. The various tilesets mixed well and had calm colors pleasing to the eye. I was impressed by the gimmicks of the three question block colors, even though the vegetable blocks were essentially useless. I loved the theme of the water and poison switching, and the purple ground and other environmental features being harmful. The level was beautiful, and the gimmicks and gameplay worked out almost flawlessly. Impressive work!
    Chad (10/10)
    • This level is absolutely stunning! There are so many different gimmicks in this one, and they all have brilliant execution. The timed poison is splendidly indicated and gives the player a great amount of time to work with, the poisoned grass that you can erase with a switch is an interesting little visual, and I like how parts of the level will change as you get near them. They make the level feel alive with parts that automatically transform a little bit. The tree sections are expertly made, too. The switches are cleverly used to make room for the vine, revealing a door by clearing away poisonous water is neat, and the springboard generator is a pretty unique application. I especially enjoyed the downward propeller section, as it is very carefully built. The Munchers are placed in a fairly difficult fashion, but every move the player needs to make is very clearly indicated with coin trails while still requiring the skills to pull it off. There's a unique variety of switches, and on top of everything else, the level is brimming with detail and complex design. Everything felt good about it, both playing and looking at it, and the level offers a complete experience that isn't lacking in any regard that I can see. Nothing felt unfair or excessive. Well done!
    Quill (8.5/10)
    • Dude, this is an amazing level. There is so much creativity here. The atmosphere is nailed perfectly and I loved how the overworld and caverns below are linked in one section, that's a really neat idea. The gimmick with the poison has been used before, but it's still used effectively for the most part here. I didn't like how going close to the poison would sometimes make it turn into normal water. The reason behind this is that in the first section, I went down a pipe and found a path covered by poison and assumed I had to do something else to remove the poison. I spent a good amount of time searching for a way until I went back and saw that going close to the poison opened the path. That was a little annoying. Overall though, great job!
    TNTtimelord (10/10)
    • Damn, whoever made this level knows how to make a level.
      This level looked absolutely gorgeous. The scenery, the tileset, the NPCs blended together flawlessly. The gimmicks and the flashy events were all flawlessly done. The two tilesets blended together VERY well and all the tileset mixing shows you know how to deal with graphics as well. Coins, items, all done perfectly as well! I would say though, the purple water that would turn blue only if you jumped into it was a rather cheap move, but that was made up very well with the section introducing it back and forth. I really wish the temple also would have been continued, but I have no problem seeing what I did, because that still looked amazing.
      Overall, I was astounded at this level.
    zlakerboy357 (9.6/10)
    • What an amazing level! The poison and water gimmick in this level is cool and novel! I loved how you did other stuff as well such as the SMW Blocks and the tileset itself. The level looked magical as well due of how amazing the tileset, BGOs and the BG was. Most of the GFXs was darken except for the fireballs which I really feel it should've been. The level's start is a bit messy to be honest since I was a bit confused what path I was suppose to go, otherwise I loved the level. Great job!
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Re: Tribal Moonlight Transition (First Place)

Postby Superiorstar » Tue Nov 04, 2014 6:02 pm

*Looks inside spoiler

*Has a seizure
Totally playing this when I get back from my party.
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Re: Tribal Moonlight Transition (First Place)

Postby Sux » Tue Nov 04, 2014 6:03 pm

I know than you are surprise, because you don't make it to win...
But congratulations brother, you deserve or no
First brazilian win a official contest.
And you know, than I liked a lot of the gimmicks, only the poison water is a bit chaotic, but...good work

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Re: Tribal Moonlight Transition (First Place)

Postby Chip Potato » Tue Nov 04, 2014 6:46 pm

Holy crap, those cave-to-overworld tile transitions. That is computer witchcraft of the finest kind, that's what that is. I'm honestly intrigued to play this level.
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Re: Tribal Moonlight Transition (First Place)

Postby Waddle » Wed Nov 05, 2014 5:54 am

Holy cow.
This is AWESOME.
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Re: Tribal Moonlight Transition (First Place)

Postby Darkonius Mavakar » Wed Nov 05, 2014 8:19 am

This definitely deserved 1st place, good job.

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Re: Tribal Moonlight Transition (First Place)

Postby Lx Xzit » Thu Nov 06, 2014 11:46 am

Oh no! my eyes! had never seen anything so beautiful !, you really deserve the first place, was eager to play this level, now is the time. (:

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Re: Tribal Moonlight Transition (First Place)

Postby Kyo » Thu Nov 06, 2014 12:43 pm

Marry me.

This really has DarkYoshi style.

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Re: Tribal Moonlight Transition (First Place)

Postby Aristo » Thu Nov 06, 2014 1:02 pm

Omg I love the transitions between the tileset, this looks amazing, can't wait to play it. But I'm gonna save it for ToB8 so I have a motivation to play through all of it :P
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Re: Tribal Moonlight Transition (First Place)

Postby zlaker » Thu Nov 06, 2014 1:04 pm

This was clearly the best level submitted in the contest. Not really suprised that you won.
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Re: Tribal Moonlight Transition (First Place)

Postby Shinbison-Kof » Thu Nov 06, 2014 4:12 pm

Thanks guys, I'm very happy with the great comments and you enjoyed my level. :D
IMO in the contest have incredibles levels and they deserve wins.
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Re: Tribal Moonlight Transition (First Place)

Postby icez » Sun Nov 09, 2014 9:20 pm

Excellent Level heres my Playthrough
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Re: Tribal Moonlight Transition (First Place)

Postby Shinbison-Kof » Mon Nov 10, 2014 10:27 am

@Icez: Thanks for enjoy my level and played this in the video ( I liked this video!) :D
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Review of "Tribal Moonlight Transition"

Postby Storm Lakitu » Wed Nov 12, 2014 12:53 pm

1 Word:
Wow!

I decided to check out the Levels Section and clicked on Best.I read "First Place" and clicked on your Topic.I downloaded,played,and almost cried.I almost cried because it was so good! Well....Here is my Review (if it does man anything to you ;D)

Level Design:
I really like the Overall Level Design of this Level.The Tiki Guys and Koopas really catched some style,and they fit in really well.Also,i love that you change different stages (inside the Tree,outside in the Poisonous Jungle).Your level also has the perfect diffictulty,not to hard,not to easy,world 4 Style :)

Points: 9.5/10 (Almost Perfect)

Ideas:
The Ideas in your Level are Great! The different parts in the level,like the gliding part,or the switch part in the first section,really bring some variety and Fun into this Level.

Points: 10/10 (Variety,Fun,Perfect Difficulty Rate)

Customs:
I haven´t seen anything unedited,and everything looks great,so theres nothing to complain about (I guess) ;)

Points: 9.5/10 ([Almost]Everything Custom,Awesome Looks)

Playfun:
I had much Fun in this level,and even if i died,i wasnt angry or annoyed because the Checkpoint was set right and the Passages didnt seem to stretch,at all.

Points: 9/10 (Perfect Fun,Good to Play,Doesnt Seem/Isnt Stretched)

Replay Value:
This Level has some Replay Value,because there are Blue Coins and Yoshi Coins to collect,and there are many things to discover,so i would give the point there.

Points: 1/1

Overall Rating: 39 out of 41 = 95% of Points

Overall Feeling:The Level Plays Good and i cant seem to find Molly Uhhhm Weaknesses.It looks good and has awesome Ideas.Much Fun and challenge is envolved,but it gets never froustrating.The Level has a decent Replay Value,just because of the looks.

Overall Mark: 1+*
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Re: Tribal Moonlight Transition (First Place)

Postby Shinbison-Kof » Fri Nov 14, 2014 5:39 pm

Thanks, I'm happy with this comment! :D
Yes! but some graphics, others did, I only recolor ( few things,). Example: Tribal Koopa -reghrhre, bridge tileset - Shikaternia
The tileset, bg and some bgos, I did this! ( The tree bgo and tileset also!)
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Re: Tribal Moonlight Transition (First Place)

Postby LordKofu » Tue Dec 02, 2014 2:53 pm

Could you please fix the screenshots? :*

Awesome level by the way. Quoting TNTimelord:

Damn, whoever made this level knows how to make a level.
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Re: Tribal Moonlight Transition (First Place)

Postby Core » Sun Dec 21, 2014 3:28 am

Its Best Level I ever played, i like BGOs, Design, More! good job with 1st place!

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Re: Tribal Moonlight Transition (First Place)

Postby Rage_quitter_98 » Mon Dec 22, 2014 12:58 am

Looks amazing, i especially like the Cave Tileset mixing with the Dirt/Grassland Tileset.
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Re: Tribal Moonlight Transition (First Place)

Postby Shinbison-Kof » Mon Dec 22, 2014 11:37 am

Thanks everyone, I'm very happy with the comments =)
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