Super Mario: One Last Time

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Super Mario: One Last Time

Postby Moonknight702 » Sat Nov 14, 2015 11:09 pm

Hello! I'm here to show you a project I recently got back to working on! Check it out, and tell me what you think. Just download the file, and put it in your SMBX worlds file, should work fine.

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https://www.dropbox.com/sh/9ace6ygtufeh ... Reyda?dl=0
Here's the link to the folder in dropbox, if you have an issue, let me know.
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Re: Super Mario: One Last Time

Postby Mosaic » Sun Nov 15, 2015 8:09 pm

This looks pretty okay so far. It could use improvement though.
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Re: Super Mario: One Last Time

Postby Bryan » Sun Nov 15, 2015 8:18 pm

Seems a bit bland but a very good start nonetheless.

May I advise you try to use some custom graphics to spice up your levels. Adding coins, background objects and making levels interactive are also some things to consider.

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Re: Super Mario: One Last Time

Postby TLtimelord » Sun Nov 15, 2015 10:58 pm

Looks like so far you have a couple pre-levels and then a 1-1.

If I were you I would have made more progress than that before a topic, but there's no going back now!
Bryan wrote:Seems a bit bland but a very good start nonetheless.

May I advise you try to use some custom graphics to spice up your levels. Adding coins, background objects and making levels interactive are also some things to consider.
I'd sooner educate a newbie on design before CGFX as it builds better potential for great levels. Also, if you're a smart person who continued reading after Bryan's post, be a decent person and don't fill this topic with posts bashing him for suggesting GFX. This is 2015, not 2013.
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Re: Super Mario: One Last Time

Postby Bryan » Mon Nov 16, 2015 11:47 pm

Don't get me wrong either, people can create some really amazing levels without custom graphics but I was just asking him to consider custom GFX to add some spice and originality to his project. For example, a custom background or tileset can catch the attention of your audience. Why? Because it sets it apart from all the other projects and that's what you want to aim for.


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