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Goatmom's Tale

Postby thunderlakitu » Sun Feb 21, 2016 9:47 am

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First, this Episode is full of Undertale Spoilers, so... play first Undertale.
Second, My English is not perfect... and when I say not perfect I say "my english is garbage", so, if anyone can help me correcting typos, that would be very nice :D
Third, I'm... not very good in SMBX, this is the first actual serious Episode I do, so, don't be too hard because some levels are too plane, or because Some sprites I did are pretty meh (I also did the 90% of the sprites, so... yeah)
The game is pretty simple, and there is 15 levels (16 with the Credits level)
I really don't know what to say, if you played Undertale, you are gonna like this (or maybe not... I dunno)
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Re: Goatmom's Tale

Postby Lyrin » Sun Feb 21, 2016 5:47 pm

All the songs sound like you converted them from ogg to midi to mp3.
Levels are pretty bad, not terrible though. Snowdin is just the worse thing ever, only second to Hotland, which the quiz was horrible. It wouldn't be be that bad if the levels weren't long and repetitive, and you didn't use Toriel as the main character.

TL;DR: You made me hate Undertale.
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Re: Goatmom's Tale

Postby sh4dy » Sun Feb 21, 2016 6:31 pm

Looks nice i will play it ;)
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Sorry for my bad english, I try my best :)

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Re: Goatmom's Tale

Postby sh4dy » Sun Feb 21, 2016 7:17 pm

First, i realy like the gfx. They are pretty nice.
But my problem with this episode is:
the levels are to uneventful (snowdin).
that backtracking in Hotland & Snowdin if you're going the wrong way.
and the music is sometimes too silent. I would also prefer WAY more the original soundtrack.

But for your first serious Episode it's ok.
Sorry for my bad english, I try my best :)

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Re: Goatmom's Tale

Postby Enjl » Sun Feb 21, 2016 9:01 pm

This killed me.
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Re: Goatmom's Tale

Postby MECHDRAGON777 » Mon Feb 22, 2016 12:21 am

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Re: Goatmom's Tale

Postby thunderlakitu » Mon Feb 22, 2016 3:23 am

I decided to change that backtracking, so is not that cruel...
Thanks everyone for the comments! Glad to know that you liked it!

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Re: Goatmom's Tale

Postby MECHDRAGON777 » Mon Feb 22, 2016 4:31 am

thunderlakitu wrote:I decided to change that backtracking, so is not that cruel...
Thanks everyone for the comments! Glad to know that you liked it!
I would like to point out I was not trying that hard in the video. It had its fun moments.
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Re: Goatmom's Tale

Postby thunderlakitu » Mon Feb 22, 2016 10:58 am

MECHDRAGON777 wrote:
thunderlakitu wrote:I decided to change that backtracking, so is not that cruel...
Thanks everyone for the comments! Glad to know that you liked it!
I would like to point out I was not trying that hard in the video. It had its fun moments.
I didn't have time to watch the video before, I'm glad you like it! :D
(I'm gonna need to put extra walls in the hardmode level.... :lol: )
Enjl wrote:This killed me.
I'm sorry for hearing my creation killed you... well, thanks for playing!
Lyrin wrote:All the songs sound like you converted them from ogg to midi to mp3.
Levels are pretty bad, not terrible though. Snowdin is just the worse thing ever, only second to Hotland, which the quiz was horrible. It wouldn't be be that bad if the levels weren't long and repetitive, and you didn't use Toriel as the main character.

TL;DR: You made me hate Undertale.
It's fine, you can hate whatever you want! but please, next time, try to not be so rude, you can say the same without hurting feelings.
And sorry for make you lose time with this episode. :(

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Re: Goatmom's Tale

Postby AxelVoss » Wed Feb 24, 2016 5:06 pm

It's honestly not bad so far. Is this your first episode?

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Re: Goatmom's Tale

Postby bossedit8 » Thu Feb 25, 2016 7:24 am

Here, have a playthrough of this game as of what I did:



Original link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2H2X3WBgULM

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Re: Goatmom's Tale

Postby thunderlakitu » Sun Feb 28, 2016 6:39 am

AxelVoss wrote:It's honestly not bad so far. Is this your first episode?
Well... I did something 2 years ago... it was mostly jokes levels... it was awful... this is my actual first try to make something serious.
bossedit8 wrote:Here, have a playthrough of this game as of what I did:



Original link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2H2X3WBgULM
*Fixed the Woshua/ Mega mole sprite
*Now you can't kill Lemon Bread with Fireballs
This is why I love gameplays, I can see the mistakes and fix it, and also, I love to see other people playing what I did, thank you! :D

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Re: Goatmom's Tale

Postby bossedit8 » Sun Feb 28, 2016 7:30 am

thunderlakitu wrote:This is why I love gameplays, I can see the mistakes and fix it, and also, I love to see other people playing what I did, thank you! :D
No problem. I do have fun playing it. Also, there's a suggestion for you. Make sure at the end as of where you actually finish the game in a good way or whatever that there is a way to get to the credits relative to SMBX like make a event that triggers "Bowser Defeat" in the "End Game" Events so you actually finish your SMBX Episode with a 100% save file rather than only like 98% as shown at the end on my video.
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Re: Goatmom's Tale

Postby AxelVoss » Sun Feb 28, 2016 8:45 am

I'm stuck on Snowdin. >w<;;
Long level with no checkpoint is looooong.

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Re: Goatmom's Tale

Postby thunderlakitu » Sun Feb 28, 2016 3:23 pm

bossedit8 wrote:
thunderlakitu wrote:This is why I love gameplays, I can see the mistakes and fix it, and also, I love to see other people playing what I did, thank you! :D
No problem. I do have fun playing it even for . Also, there's a suggestion for you. Make sure at the end as of where you actually finish the game in a good way or whatever that there is a way to get to the credits relative to SMBX like make a event that triggers "Bowser Defeat" in the "End Game" Events so you actually finish your SMBX Episode with a 100% save file rather than only like 98% as shown at the end on my video.
Noted, I decided to put the Bowser defeat
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In the "G" level
Now it's possible to get the 100%
AxelVoss wrote:I'm stuck on Snowdin. >w<;;
Long level with no checkpoint is looooong.
Is not really that long, Once you past the Jerrys part there is a checkpoint.

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Re: Goatmom's Tale

Postby UltraEpicLeader100 » Sun Feb 28, 2016 8:10 pm

Can I use your tsunderplane sprite for an smbx episode?
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Re: Goatmom's Tale

Postby PixelPest » Sun Feb 28, 2016 8:42 pm

UltraEpicLeader100 wrote:Can I use your tsunderplane sprite for an smbx episode?
Please stay on-topic. This kind of request is better to be sent as a PM to the user.

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Re: Goatmom's Tale

Postby thunderlakitu » Fri Mar 04, 2016 6:07 pm

I decided to change some minor things, like for example NOT using coins to change events ( sorry, I didn't know how to do that, I'm still pretty noob)
and also, I changed one of the bosses full battle to make it more interesting, is the boss from
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True Lab
I hope is not too hard now...
not the only boss I changed, but the others are just minor details, like for example:
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Omega flowey now moves, but not for making it harder, just for making it looks like he is alive.
EDIT: And also, Now I did the main image (the one from the main post)

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Re: Goatmom's Tale

Postby Tepig125 » Sun Apr 24, 2016 8:16 am

This is great, from what I've seen. Just one thing: The file is a .RAR file, and I don't know how to open it. So I would suggest making a .zip file. That's what most SMBX veterans do. Other than that, it's amazing! I really liked the look of the True Lab boss fight. :D
Great job, Thunder Lakitu! Keep up the good work! :D
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Re: Goatmom's Tale

Postby Mable » Sun Apr 24, 2016 9:25 am

Tepig125 wrote:This is great, from what I've seen. Just one thing: The file is a .RAR file, and I don't know how to open it
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