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Mario: Doctrine Hero

Posted: Tue Jul 14, 2015 7:02 pm
by Mario Legacy
[After getting an alert of reading the rules, I decided to remake this with a different name. I also read the rules, but I'm not sure if I should double-post the same story. I'll make some tweaks to it, so if you read the one I got an alert on, you'll notice a bit of tweaks. Enjoy!]

Mario yawned. It had been a long day yesterday, saving the Princess, getting some pasta, and talking to his brother Luigi.

"Man.. It seems like the days go by so fast.." Mario said, looking out of the window.

"Mario, remember today's the day?" Luigi said, walking into the door.

"What's today again Luigi?" Mario asked, he looked at Luigi confused.

"We're going to the town of Doctrine today with Peach!" Luigi said, grabbing his bags.

Mario looked at his stuff, packing it up. He remembered Peach made a cake for him.

"I'm ready to go, Luigi!" Mario said, walking out with Luigi.

Peach sat in the car, while Mario and Luigi also got in.

"Everyone ready?" The Toad that was driving the car said.

"Ready!" Mario and Peach said.

"I'm not ready.." Luigi said, grabbing a paper bag from his pocket.

"Luigi, not again!" Mario said.

[End of Chapter 1.]

[So, how'd you like it? It's free to join if you want.]

Re: Mario: Doctrine Hero

Posted: Tue Jul 14, 2015 7:23 pm
by Shadow Yoshi
Are you posting a work of fan fiction or are you trying to start an RP? RP ideas must be approved in the RP idea thread.

Re: Mario: Doctrine Hero

Posted: Tue Jul 14, 2015 7:24 pm
by Mario Legacy
Hmm.. I'll change it into a Fan-Fiction.

Re: Mario: Doctrine Hero

Posted: Wed Jul 15, 2015 5:20 pm
by Mario Legacy
[Chapter 2]

The car made a stop at Doctrine.

"Mama mia.. That was a long ride.." Mario said, sighing.

"I don't feel too good.." Luigi said, spinning around dizzy.

Peach walked out of the door, with Mario and Luigi.

"It looks so beautiful!" Peach said out loud.

It began to rain, as Peach took out her umbrella.

A hotel called "Hotel de' Toad" was up ahead, as Mario ran up to it.

"One room for 3, please!" Mario said to the person standing outside.

"That'll be 100 Coins, please." The Guardtoad said.

"I'm 1 short.. Dangit.." Mario said.

"Wait, Mario! I have 1 coin you can have!" Luigi said, tossing his brother Mario a coin.

"Thanks Bro!" Mario said, handing the Guardtoad 100 coins.

Peach and Luigi walked up to the door also. The Guardtoad escorted them to their room.

The room looked more like a dungeon, more than a hotel room.

"It must be another trap of Bowser.." Mario said, as the door locked behind them.

"LET ME GO!" Mario said, banging on the door.

[Chapter 2- End]