While incredibly simplistic I would have to say it was perfectly executed.
Level Design [3/5]
For one, the midway point is was too out of place. It exists in its own sub-section which the player can easily disregard if they are stupid enough to do so. On top of this, the midway point is white and so is the background it rests in. This being said, one can not only skip the midway point but not even notice it if they aren't paying attention. In addition to this, I find it difficult to effectively platform on multiple line-riding platforms when both of their liens are the exact same length. Meaning that with poor timing you can actually get yourself completely stuck because both of the platforms will be equal distance from each other so you can never actually jump to the next platform.
Graphical Continuity [4/5]
I highly appreciated the originality in the Line Rider graphic, but it sticks out like a sore thumb. I feel like it should either be a different color or not be so bloody thick. Then there is also the sperm ghosts as well, sometimes that enemy can blend in with the major BG itself which can surprise the player. But that last comment is not being taken into consideration for the score, since it is the player's responsibility to notice NPCs but I highly recommend given them a more distinct color.
Music Continuity [5/5]
No Comment: the music was fitting for the level. While I could name quite a few musical pieces that would fit more, I can say that your level was perfect enough.
BGO Placement [5/5]
No Comment. The mixture of reed/bamboo on top of a very large canopy gave the level a GREAT atmosphere. I also consider the falling leaves into this category since they were not real NPCs or obstacles.
NPC Placement [5/5]
If the sperm ghosts get a graphical change, then I will consider this perfect. Since it is the only problem that I have, I will no dock off points. The rest of the enemies were well placed, albeit much too easy but I am no complaining.
Diffculty / Replayability [5/5]
The difficulty of this level is way too easy given the amount of resources you had at your disposal. However, the replay-ability of this level is what gives this level a 5/5 in this category. I had a ton of fun in this level even though I only died out of curiosity and impatience.
Overall Score: 32/35
Final Score: 9.1
Judgement: The Best
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