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Unoficial review of Ash Wasteland made by Phazon1111
The level looks pretty nice, altough there is a big lack of BGOs like bushes, cactuses, pyramids or if this is a wasteland then dead bushes or weeds.
Also a lots of areas look pretty flat. For example the area with the block pyramids. A little bit more slopes and piranha pipes would make the level look
more decorated too. NPCs are okay but the flat areas are making team easy to avoid, like the buzzy beetle after the pyramids or some red-para-goombas.
The level was pretty short so adding red coins, especially when the level is very linear, isn't the best idea at all. What really fits to the level is the music.
Its just great and adds the feeling that this is a deserted level. So just a conclusion: Try to decorate the level with some BGOs or add more slopes and pipes to make it look better and so flat. Red coin hunting isnt the best idea when the level is very short and linear because it can be very easy to get them, unless there is some extreme platforming, underwater or switch block maze. There are 3 leafs very close to each other. For example 1 leaf at the beggining of the level and 1 leaf at the middle of it would be okay. Also be careful when placing pipes because they can easily create cut-offs with the ground, in this case the sand.
Example for cutoff:
And an example for a flat area:
I give a stable 3/10 for the level beause it's not so bad at all, but needs some work too.