Perfect SMBX Screenshot Thread 10

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Re: Perfect SMBX Screenshot Thread 10

Postby Nepgya » Tue Mar 13, 2018 6:01 am

I've been trying to improve my world map skills, feedback would be appreciated.
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Re: Perfect SMBX Screenshot Thread 10

Postby Super Luigi! » Tue Mar 13, 2018 11:20 am

Lukas wrote:I've been trying to improve my world map skills, feedback would be appreciated.
I don't have any constructive criticism, but I do like this. Specifically, the waterfall and color of the land are definitely pleasing. Well done, dear Lukas.
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Re: Perfect SMBX Screenshot Thread 10

Postby 8lue Storm » Tue Mar 13, 2018 12:06 pm

Lukas wrote:I've been trying to improve my world map skills, feedback would be appreciated.
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Hey, that's actually pretty good! However, try shortening the paths a bit. Some of them are long, and waiting for the cutscene to happen for a big path is kinda boring.
Other than that, it's great!
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Re: Perfect SMBX Screenshot Thread 10

Postby Cedur » Tue Mar 13, 2018 12:49 pm

The wall being purple (in contrast with the green landscape) looks odd to me, and there are two edged paths.
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Re: Perfect SMBX Screenshot Thread 10

Postby TLtimelord » Tue Mar 13, 2018 1:42 pm

Lukas wrote:I've been trying to improve my world map skills, feedback would be appreciated.
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This section right here is rather awkward as the grassy portion looks like it's just stacked on top of the beach portion. The top grassy island should be extended down one tile for depth purposes. Also, some of the paths between levels are really long & if there is an intentional reason behind why the cliff tiles have a sort of pink tint to them I'd probably change it to a more brown color. Otherwise, it looks pretty good.
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Re: Perfect SMBX Screenshot Thread 10

Postby PopYoshi » Sun Mar 18, 2018 2:34 pm

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Re: Perfect SMBX Screenshot Thread 10

Postby WildWEEGEE » Sun Mar 18, 2018 2:48 pm

Lukas wrote:I've been trying to improve my world map skills, feedback would be appreciated.
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In the bottom right, there is a path corner piece that doesn't curve
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Re: Perfect SMBX Screenshot Thread 10

Postby rixithechao » Mon Mar 19, 2018 1:10 am

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Re: Perfect SMBX Screenshot Thread 10

Postby PopYoshi » Mon Mar 19, 2018 5:45 am

not rockythechao wrote:
rocky at the beginning of the all stars contest wrote:aaaaa dagnabbit I want to enter but I have so much other stuff on my plate
rocky at the beginning of spring break wrote:okay I'm definitely not going to enter, I should use this time to finish the successor to textblox
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Re: Perfect SMBX Screenshot Thread 10

Postby rixithechao » Mon Mar 19, 2018 6:46 am

Pop Yoshi Bros wrote:Is that Brauner?
mmmmmaaaayyybyes yes it is
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Re: Perfect SMBX Screenshot Thread 10

Postby Enjl » Thu Mar 29, 2018 11:59 am

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Re: Perfect SMBX Screenshot Thread 10

Postby ShadowStarX » Thu Mar 29, 2018 5:09 pm

Enjl wrote:Image
Resizable gif recorder?
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Re: Perfect SMBX Screenshot Thread 10

Postby Quantix » Thu Mar 29, 2018 5:11 pm

so when can we just zoom out and see the whole section at once
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Re: Perfect SMBX Screenshot Thread 10

Postby Enjl » Thu Mar 29, 2018 5:22 pm

ShadowStarX wrote:Resizable gif recorder?
No?
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This can't run better than 16fps
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Re: Perfect SMBX Screenshot Thread 10

Postby HenryRichard » Thu Mar 29, 2018 6:52 pm

Are you repeatedly moving the camera around, capturing it to a screen buffer, and then rendering it all at once every four frames?
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Re: Perfect SMBX Screenshot Thread 10

Postby Enjl » Thu Mar 29, 2018 7:06 pm

HenryRichard wrote:Are you repeatedly moving the camera around, capturing it to a screen buffer, and then rendering it all at once every four frames?
I update each corner as I receive it, but yes. Syncing them is not something I've done. I should make a 7 fps version that works with any player position...
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Re: Perfect SMBX Screenshot Thread 10

Postby WildWEEGEE » Wed Apr 04, 2018 3:50 pm

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Its WIP but I'm very proud of it so far.
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Re: Perfect SMBX Screenshot Thread 10

Postby 8lue Storm » Wed Apr 04, 2018 4:03 pm

WildWEEGEE wrote:Image
Its WIP but I'm very proud of it so far.
It's very very nice. However the woods feel kinda weird imo.
I'm also proud of it :p
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Re: Perfect SMBX Screenshot Thread 10

Postby HealthyMario » Thu Apr 05, 2018 5:44 am

the background's kinda weird cause the pale orange sky is connected to the green rocks

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Re: Perfect SMBX Screenshot Thread 10

Postby Electriking » Thu Apr 05, 2018 6:08 am

HealthyMario wrote:the background's kinda weird cause the pale orange sky is connected to the green rocks
It is the editor rendering the background incorrectly. It probably isn't like that in game.
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