My first level! Yay!

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My first level! Yay!

Postby superandrea_04 » Mon Jun 27, 2016 12:16 pm

Updated the link because of custom music missing. Sorry!

Hi everyone, superandrea_04's here!

Today i finally made my first level! Yay!
Here's the link :arrow: http://www.mediafire.com/download/af373 ... ted%29.rar
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I also tried to change some graphics, and i will use them in EVERY level i make. I hope you're not dissapointed! :)
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I'm not feeling it. Sorry.

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Re: My first level! Yay!

Postby h2643 » Mon Jun 27, 2016 12:33 pm

The slope corner's dirt colors look a bit lighter than the normal dirt, it's odd.

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Re: My first level! Yay!

Postby Enjl » Mon Jun 27, 2016 12:34 pm

What a charming first level. It has some nice touches like the clouds appearing in the beginning, as well as varying areas and challenges.
The custom graphics you included do more harm than good, though. They're incredibly bright against anything else in the level and aren't shaded at all. I think the level would be much more pleasing if you used the vanilla assets instead.
You also seem to have forgotten to include any custom music files. Half the level was silent.
Lastly, I got pretty confused when I got to the door but couldn't enter it. Turns out you stepped into a bug with PGE. Warp entrance direction works for pipes, as well as for doors! You have to hit down to enter this door, while normally you enter doors by pressing "up". To fix this, select the warps, turn them into pipe warps and change the entrance direction to the up arrow. It's pretty awkward, I know.

Hope to be seeing more from you in the future!
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Re: My first level! Yay!

Postby superandrea_04 » Mon Jun 27, 2016 12:37 pm

Thanks for the comment, Enji! Yes, i know there's not custom music in half level. I forgot to add that after i realeased it. I added the music after that. So, i don't have time now, maybe i will fix that tomorrow.
P.S: Also, i made some of the graphics with my cousin of 7 years old. I made the blocks with him. Specially the grass.
P.P.S I didn't use PGE! I used the normal SMBX editor :P
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Re: My first level! Yay!

Postby Enjl » Mon Jun 27, 2016 12:40 pm

If you want to get more into making custom graphics, check out this thread! Cheers!
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Re: My first level! Yay!

Postby superandrea_04 » Tue Jun 28, 2016 7:37 am

h2643 wrote:The slope corner's dirt colors look a bit lighter than the normal dirt, it's odd.
Thanks for the comment, h2643! Fixed that.
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Re: My first level! Yay!

Postby goldmelonmaster » Thu Jun 30, 2016 11:00 am

Try adding some shading or less vibrant colours in your custom graphics.
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Re: My first level! Yay!

Postby hikki_power222 » Wed Jul 06, 2016 7:05 am

What did you smoke? GFXs are so toxic.

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Re: My first level! Yay!

Postby TDK » Wed Jul 06, 2016 3:46 pm

This level was poorly made. There's a lot of problems.
- The custom graphics were done poorly.
- Enemy spam in the level.
- The sign says "choose between two paths" is misleading, as there's only one path. You should remove that sign, and make Cloudcity a bonus area.
- Default yellow switch blocks.
- The other switch blocks are redundant.
- Cheep-cheep AI should be "swim left/right" instead of "swim".
- Lots of cutoff. For example:
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A quick edit.
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Overall there isn't anything good about the level, but this is your first level and you can improve.

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Re: My first level! Yay!

Postby Valtteri » Fri Jul 08, 2016 2:35 pm

Please post 1.4 levels in Casual Levels.
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