You should put the screens on the topic.
I fix this for you.
Here are the screens. I suppose pretty good puts them in a spoiler.
Just edit the topic and put it in the screens part.
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Anyway, I liked the style of the episode. It's nothing we've ever seen, but it's very interesting. I only advise you to explore the mechanics of the jump a bit more.
Nice job, however.