Mice Mice Paradise

[Witchking666]

Heya
here is a level of mine that takes place in a desert made of cheese
it has one giant section and a second section which is really small
it will be featured in Super Mario Bros And The Mystery Of Bowser's Castle.
and it will also be a part Of Super Mario Bros: Bowsers Annihilation ( as a secret level )


Screenie (warning only click if you don't care about spoilers because it pretty much shows the whole level, and is really big)

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CREDITS

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Cheese Tileset made by @PROX
Desert enemies made by @BigPotato
Mice npc's @seconddcollipede, edited by Witchking666

and here is the Download link, brought to you all the way from hyrule!
http://www.mediafire.com/download/251sr ... radise.rar

enjoy and give feedback

[Erik]

This level is good, although I think it could be a bit longer.

[Witchking666]

This level is good, although I think it could be a bit longer.

Ill make it longer if zlaker, spinda, glitch or shadowstar says so
But personally i like it as it is

[PROX]

I personally think the length was fine, the only issues I had with this level were the broken death effects and cutoff in certain areas.

[Witchking666]

The broken death effects were because secondacollipede
Didnt make those, and i didnt see broken death effects for whatever reason

I'll be fixing the cutoff too
But Where is it?
I have checked every single bgo and sizable for cutoff and the only cutoff there was was in the tileset
And since i dont have permission to edit your tiles, i couldnt fix that

Didnt you have problems with npc-placement though

[PROX]

the npc placement was ok. The cutoff was because you put the 1x1 slopes in the wrong place. If you replace them with outer corner tiles, it should work out.

[Squishy Rex]

Just a quick question, did those cactus' come from Sednaiur's project or are they some of his released graphics?

[Chip Potato]

Just a quick question, did those cactus' come from Sednaiur's project or are they some of his released graphics?

The cactus graphics are part of the Cheese Desert graphics witchking used.

[Witchking666]

Just a quick question, did those cactus' come from Sednaiur's project or are they some of his released graphics?

As stated above they were made by PROX

And i would kinda want a review because this is in the level forum

[SecondScolipede]

Mind if I ask, can you leave a credit for my mice NPC's in the first post? It's not too big of a deal, just making sure.

[Witchking666]

ill do that
But why i didnt do it is because you said they were just small edits
But yeah its there now

[Mable]

Ill make it longer if zlaker, spinda, glitch or shadowstar says so
But personally i like it as it is

So only if they say it not if someone else does not? That makes no sense

[Witchking666]

Ill make it longer if zlaker, spinda, glitch or shadowstar says so
But personally i like it as it is

So only if they say it not if someone else does not? That makes no sense

That's because i like the length
But if the level judges say that it's a mistake
Them that probably is the case lol

[bigpotato]

Nice length, nice usage of the npcs, the second special area was perfect difficulty (for me anyway, though I'm not particularly good,) and a good combination of themes. Recommended.

[Witchking666]

Thanks for the nice words
But please
I WANT A REVIEW

[PixelPest]

My Review of Mice Mice Paradise:
(I know I’m not an LJ but I wanted to review this anyways.)
Level Design: 6.3/10 (Weighed 70%)
Although this level was unique due to the graphics, the level design itself wasn’t anything special. I enjoyed the length of the level and the non-linear layout, but the variety of NPCs was just a bit too much. Due to the cheese/mouse theme, the level would definitely have looked better without the custom Goombas and Koopa troopas, due to the fact that they didn’t fit the theme overly well. The overall variation between the different types of mice and the cactus piranha plants would have been fine on their own. Coin placement and power-up placement was fine, but there were too few dragon coins (only three), so there was no point of collecting them since a 1-up or extra star is not given when all of them are collected. Two parts of the level felt a little bit cramped but it was mostly okay. I liked the idea of the quicksand with the cacti at the bottom. The level could also use a few more ?-blocks as well not containing power-ups, due to the fact that overall the level seemed to have a few less than usual, especially in the overworld area.
Graphics/Music: 8.0/10 (Weighed 30%)
Overall, the graphics and music both fit really well with this level. The quicksand would look really cool in my opinion if it was melting cheese due to the fact that everything else was cheese and the vanilla quicksand didn’t really fit with the rest of the GFX. As I mentioned above, the custom GFX for the Goombas and Koopa Troopas didn’t really seem to fit. The music was really nice and fitting, as well as enjoyable.
Overall: 6.81/10

[Witchking666]

Thanks for the review

But hey
It isn't just a cheese level
Its also a desert level
So that's why there are cacti and quicksand

[PixelPest]

Thanks for the review

But hey
It isn't just a cheese level
Its also a desert level
So that's why there are cacti and quicksand

It seemed more predominantly cheese themed due to the fact that almost all of the blocks were a shade of yellow, as well as the fact that the player first sees mice NPCs. That gave me the idea that the level was desert styled, but the sand was replaced by cheese, which made me think that the darker, yellow cheese was cheddar and the ground was mozzarella. That's why the level gave me that impression, so that's how I reviewed it.

[PROX]

Thanks for the review

But hey
It isn't just a cheese level
Its also a desert level
So that's why there are cacti and quicksand

It seemed more predominantly cheese themed due to the fact that almost all of the blocks were a shade of yellow, as well as the fact that the player first sees mice NPCs. That gave me the idea that the level was desert styled, but the sand was replaced by cheese, which made me think that the darker, yellow cheese was cheddar and the ground was mozzarella. That's why the level gave me that impression, so that's how I reviewed it.

you are actually right lol That is what I was going for when making the tileset. I just decided not to make the quicksand

[Witchking666]

Heya fixed a bunch of stuff
*fixed 45 degree slope cutoff
*fixed quicksand
*gave double mouse a recolor to fit the atmosphere more

EDIT
also fixed the ?-block error