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Neoteric Super Mario Bros.: Discord server!

Postby 8lue Storm » Fri Jan 19, 2018 8:10 am

I've been working on this project for a while now, and now that I'm in the community, I think I can share it. It's called Neoteric Super Mario Bros.!
I'm trying to make NeoSMB as NSMB-ish as possible, and I hope I am doing it well.
STORY
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The story is just like any other NSMB game: Peach gets kidnapped, yadda yadda yadda, but I think I'll revamp the story a bit.
SCREENSHOTS (Because I know you love them!) New screenshots right out of the oven! [01/21/2018]
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Playable characters will vary. Link is not included, and Peach is now recolored as Daisy.
WORLDS:
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Headland Meadows: 2/8 levels done, 4 in progress.
Sandsoil Isle: 0/8 levels done, 1 in progress.
Uncanny Yards: 1/8 levels done, 0 in progress.
Waterbulb Prairie: 0/8 levels done, 2 in progress.
Nebula Heights: 1/8 levels done, 0 in progress.
Flinty Mountaintop: 0/8 levels done, 0 in progress.
Hiemal Hills: 1/8 levels done, 0 in progress.
Koopa Throne: 0/8 levels done, 0 in progress.
Star Coin Special: 0/10 levels done, 1 in progress.
World Map: 12%
In every level, there will be three star coins (just like the NSMB series) and, collecting a specific number of them will unlock levels in World 9, so watch out for them!
About Discord & Help
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This is the Discord server if you want to join.
https://discord.gg/3qZqNEr
You can also help the project by being a:
LEVEL DESIGNER:
- 8luestorm (myself)
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- Ludwig Von Koopa
GRAPHIC DESIGNER:
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- Tempest
BETA TESTER
- Taycamgame
- Tempest
- TheNewGuy
Thanks in advance.
And that's... That! I hope you liked it, and please leave suggestions and commentaries.
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Re: Neoteric Super Mario Bros.

Postby D+E 4ever » Fri Jan 19, 2018 12:09 pm

Look pretty nice. Personally: 9/10
Maybe a too Little more of decoration.

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Re: Neoteric Super Mario Bros.

Postby 8lue Storm » Fri Jan 19, 2018 12:36 pm

D+E 4ever wrote:Look pretty nice. Personally: 9/10
Maybe a too Little more of decoration.
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Re: Neoteric Super Mario Bros.

Postby xDestroy » Fri Jan 19, 2018 8:54 pm

This project looks very promising! Did not expect this from a newcomer ;), however; i feel like the 7th screenshot is a lot two flat, maybe try adding some gimmick like some moving bridge platforms to bring some platforming to it, also in that screenshot; the recommend plant looks ugly, i recommend shading it more and adding a better colour pallet to it
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Re: Neoteric Super Mario Bros.

Postby 8lue Storm » Fri Jan 19, 2018 9:24 pm

xDestroy wrote:This project looks very promising! Did not expect this from a newcomer ;), however; i feel like the 7th screenshot is a lot two flat, maybe try adding some gimmick like some moving bridge platforms to bring some platforming to it, also in that screenshot; the recommend plant looks ugly, i recommend shading it more and adding a better colour pallet to it
Nice observations! I will shade the ptooie (yes, it's a ptooie) better, as even I think it's a little ugly.
And I added some gimmick to it, don't worry. It's a power-up gimmick, where you have to use it in order to get a Star Coin.
The level we speak of is 2-2 Pink Ptooie Pier, and I am currently working on it. (Currently means not right now, but, you know, casually).
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Re: Neoteric Super Mario Bros.

Postby D+E 4ever » Mon Jan 22, 2018 7:01 pm

8lue Storm wrote:
D+E 4ever wrote:Look pretty nice. Personally: 9/10
Maybe a too Little more of decoration.
What do you mean by "too little more of decoration?"
Clouds, more vegetation, etc

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Re: Neoteric Super Mario Bros.

Postby 8lue Storm » Mon Jan 22, 2018 7:30 pm

D+E 4ever wrote:
8lue Storm wrote:
D+E 4ever wrote:Look pretty nice. Personally: 9/10
Maybe a too Little more of decoration.
What do you mean by "too little more of decoration?"
Clouds, more vegetation, etc
Hm. Yes, I feel the lack of clouds in my levels. I will try to include more creative backgrounds to improve the scenery. Thanks for the reply! I'll certainly apply your suggestions.
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Re: Neoteric Super Mario Bros.

Postby ADMAndrew » Sat Feb 10, 2018 12:11 am

I can't wait for this :lol: Your project looks very well in environment and level design
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Re: Neoteric Super Mario Bros.

Postby TheLoafLord » Sat Feb 10, 2018 1:35 am

Wow, this looks really interesting and well done so far.
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Re: Neoteric Super Mario Bros.

Postby Eri7 » Fri Mar 02, 2018 6:19 pm

Oh this looks nice , i really like the green switches in the seven screenshot and also the rabbits in the second screenshot , it makes the level feel more alive. Good job , i hope this project's development goes good.
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Re: Neoteric Super Mario Bros.

Postby 8lue Storm » Fri Mar 02, 2018 6:54 pm

Eri7 wrote:Oh this looks nice , i really like the green switches in the seven screenshot and also the rabbits in the second screenshot , it makes the level feel more alive. Good job , i hope this project's development goes good.
This project is going through a MAJOR REVAMP, so some levels will be deleted and new ones will arrive. This is because my levels were too short and way too easy. This doesn't include the Green Switch Level (2-1 Sandy Donuts), but it does include the Bunny level (1-2 Bunny Park). Now that I think about it, the bunnies weren't such a bad idea, I'll be sure to include them somewhere; Maybe in 1-3.
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Re: Neoteric Super Mario Bros.: Discord server!

Postby 8lue Storm » Tue Apr 10, 2018 2:00 pm

Bumpty Bumpty this project was Revampty!
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Re: Neoteric Super Mario Bros.: Discord server!

Postby 8lue Storm » Wed Apr 18, 2018 1:51 pm

5-1 is just in progress. It looks like this:
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(The blocks move up and down, in case you're wondering)
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Re: Neoteric Super Mario Bros.: Discord server!

Postby SMBXFanBoi2013 » Tue May 08, 2018 7:56 pm

Can I be the Level Designer?
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Re: Neoteric Super Mario Bros.: Discord server!

Postby 8lue Storm » Thu May 10, 2018 8:45 pm

SMBXFanBoi2013 wrote:
Tue May 08, 2018 7:56 pm
Can I be the Level Designer?
Well, not THE level designer (heh), but yes, you can certainly design levels! Check out the server for more info.
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Re: Neoteric Super Mario Bros.: Discord server!

Postby 8lue Storm » Sat Oct 13, 2018 7:02 pm

Back to the "topic", are we not?
As Eri7 told me (just like he "tells me" about anything I do), I need to advertise my project more, and make updates.
Well, here's one update for all of you. Or some of you. Or 0.5% of the people on these forums that actually know of this project's existence.
Screens and GIFs of recent levels (actually idk how GIF work here so just images)
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The Discord Server is still a thing, you know. There are almost daily updates there, some of which I didn't put here (because GIFs and other thingies). From either me or the other level designers.
Have fun I guess
also sorry for bump
and sorry for small screens IF YOU WERE ON THE DISCORD SERVER THE IMAGES WOULD BE JUST FINE
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Re: Neoteric Super Mario Bros.: Discord server!

Postby Tempest » Sat Oct 13, 2018 7:14 pm

8lue Storm wrote:
Sat Oct 13, 2018 7:02 pm
Back to the "topic", are we not?
As Eri7 told me (just like he "tells me" about anything I do), I need to advertise my project more, and make updates.
Well, here's one update for all of you. Or some of you. Or 0.5% of the people on these forums that actually know of this project's existence.
Screens and GIFs of recent levels (actually idk how GIF work here so just images)
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outdated bg for 1-3
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outdated bg for 1-5
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1-T
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1-1 + HUD
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1-*
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4-1 and Fire Bro
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1-4
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The Discord Server is still a thing, you know. There are almost daily updates there, some of which I didn't put here (because GIFs and other thingies). From either me or the other level designers.
Have fun I guess
also sorry for bump
and sorry for small screens IF YOU WERE ON THE DISCORD SERVER THE IMAGES WOULD BE JUST FINE
Huh, I just realized I never posted anything in this thread even though I'm a level designer, so uhhh, hi
Also, getting attention on your project isn't very difficult, considering that each time you make a post, the thread goes all the way up in the list :P You should update it more often, though
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Re: Neoteric Super Mario Bros.: Discord server!

Postby SMBXFanBoi2013 » Sat Oct 13, 2018 9:06 pm

I am happy to see that the thread is finally updated, and the progress' are going well people!
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